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Trapped in moments of love & hate
Years passed; but laid awake
Mind paused [but body aged]  
Dried out, decomposed    
Brittle leaves, an aged rose
Unnoticed
On an unmarked grave
As faint aroma of death swirls
I still wait [six feet below]

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SeamlessMaiden Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014  Student Writer
Oh my goodness. This is beautifully sad. I love how you use the imagery to tell the story. I felt as if I could easily visualize your poem. <3
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21-TwentyOne Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
My pleasure that you find it appealing :)
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Contradictory55 Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2014  Student Writer
A heart-breaking poem... :tighthug:
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21-TwentyOne Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
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